UNIVERSIDAD TÉCNICA PARTICULAR DE LOJA
La Universidad Católica de Loja
NOVA SOUTHEASTERN UNIVERSITY
MAESTRÍA EN ENSEÑANZA DEL INGLÉS COMO LENGUA EXTRANJERA
EFL Student Case Study
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TEFL Program Portfolio
Degree thesis
Author: Kovacic, Mislav
Advisor: Pinza Tapia, Eliana Ivanova, Mgs
CERTIFICATION
Mgs. Eliana Ivanova Pinza Tapia THESIS ADVISOR
CERTIFIES THAT:
The following research work developed by Mislav Kovacic has been thoroughly
revised. Therefore, authorizes the presentation of the thesis, which complies with all the
norms and internal requirements of the Universidad Técnica Particular de Loja.
Consequently, I authorize this presentation for the corresponding legal purposes.
Loja, September, 2012
Signature _____________________________
Mgs. Eliana Pinza THESIS ADVISOR
AUTHORSHIP
The thoughts, ideas, opinions and the information obtained through this research are the
only responsibility of the author.
Date, September, 2012
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Mislav Kovacic I.D. 1723198782
Author
CESIÓN DE DERECHOS
Yo Mislav Kovacic, declaro ser autor del presente trabajo y eximo expresamente a la
Universidad Tecnica Particular de Loja y a sus representantes legales de posibles
reclamos o acciones legales.
Adicionalmente declaro conocer y aceptar la disposición del Art. 67 del Estatuto
Orgánico de la Universidad Técnica Particular de Loja que en su parte pertinente
textualmente dice: “Forman parte del patrimonio de la Universidad la propiedad
intelectual de investigaciones, trabajos científicos o técnicos y tesis de grado que se
realicen a través o con el apoyo financiero, académico, o institucional (operativo) de la
Universidad”.
Loja, September, 2012
______________________________
Mislav Kovacic C.I.: 1723198782
TABLE OF CONTENTS
CERTIFICATION II
AUTHORSHIP III
CESION DE LOS DERECHOS IV
ABSTRACT 1
INTRODUCTION 2
METHOD 3
LITERATURE REVIEW 4
CHAPTER I: EFL STUDENT CASE STUDY
Pretest 9
Artifact 1: Simple present and past 12
Artifact 2: Pronouns 14
Artifact 3: Compound sentences 16
Artifact 4: Order of adjectives 18
Artifact 5: Articles 20
Artifact 6: Review 23
Artifact 7: Paragraphs 25
Artifact 8: Writing process 27
Student self-evaluation 29
Post-test 31
CHAPTER II: STANDARDS BASED POSITION PAPER
Standard 1.A Language as a system 33
Standard 1.B Language acquisition and development 34 Standard 2 Culture as it affects student learning 36 Standard 3.A Planning for standards-based ESL and
content instruction 37
Standard 3.B Implementing and managing
standards-based ESL and content instruction 40
Standard 3.C Using resources and technology
language learners 44 Standard 4.B Language proficiency assessment 46 Standard 4.C Classroom-based assessment for ESL 47
Standard 5.A ESL research and history 49
Standard 5.B Professional development,
partnership and advocacy 55
CONCLUSIONS AND RECOMMENDATIONS 62
REFERENCES 63
ABSTRACT
This thesis has two parts. The first part follows the development of one student’s writing
skills. This part starts with a pretest in which the student’s strengths and weaknesses
are analyzed. On the basis of this analysis a plan of action is made to address the
student’s weakness and reach the specified goals. The student’s progress is then
monitored and documented with 8 different artifacts that dealt with her weaknesses. At
the end, a post-test is administered to the student and her progress is analyzed.
The second part of the thesis looks at the NCATE/TESOL standards and how they were
all covered in this Master’s program. This part presents different artifacts which are
INTRODUCTION
Writing is one of the four core skills that need to be considered in language teaching.
This is also one of the most neglected skills in language teaching in Ecuador. As a result
students often have below average writing skills which inhibit students in a wide array of
writing activities, such as writing emails, essays, reports, etc. This thesis demonstrates
one way of developing this part of language by using a standards based approach
This thesis is part of the master’s program in Teaching English as a Foreign Language.
The primary motivation was to successfully complete the program and to be awarded
the master’s degree in TEFL.
There were two objectives for this thesis. In the first part, the main objective was to use
the knowledge gained in this program into designing a course for one individual and help
them reach their personal goals. The student’s goals were mainly to improve her writing
skills as this is an area which she felt she was lacking in most. Reaching her goals
involved developing and finding appropriate materials based on the initial placement test
and subsequent progress in classes. The student was given 8 classes in which her
progress was documented through the use of different artifacts that were used in
classes.
This was an applied research in which different theories on developing writing skills
were first analyzed and then applied in practice with the student. As was previously
mentioned, there was only one student in the research, making this a case study project.
The main importance lies in the application of different theories and knowledge to help
understand the processes behind second language acquisitions, specifically writing
skills, and aid one student in their development.
The second part had a different objective, and that was to review the program itself and
reflect on the various subjects that were focused on in the last two years.
subject area. Over the past two years, different standards were met through project work
in this program and this part of the thesis documents how the goal was accomplished.
NCATE/TESOL has eleven different standards, each one within a specific domain. At
least one standard, representing each domain, was selected to present my work and
achievement of the given standard. The objective of this part of the thesis is to
demonstrate our personal development as professionals, as English teachers.
The goals were successfully reached in both parts. In the first part, it is evident from the
post-test that the student had made significant progress towards achieving her goals.
The plan that was designed worked for this student as it addressed her weaknesses and
helped the student advance her language skills, and also build confidence. The second
part illustrates how all the NCATE/TESOL standards were considered in this program
METHOD
This study involves two parts. In the case study, the learner is a 27 year old professional
from Ecuador who works in tourism. She has studied English before at a local language
institute where she obtained the proficiency certificate from the institute. She also
studied the language in her high school and university. Since graduating from university,
she has not had the opportunity to learn or use the language extensively. As she was
recently promoted to a new position in the company where she works, she has decided
to start studying English again after her five year long pause. The learner is a native
Spanish speaker, but also speaks some French and German.
Prior to starting her classes, she took the placement test which will also be analyzed as
the pre-test. According to the results of this test she was assigned to an A2 Elementary
level. Although her speaking skills were quite high for the level, she did have a low
grammar score which obviously affected her writing skills.
The learner decided to study general English once a week (Saturdays) for 5 academic
hours. Additionally, she also agreed to participate in this project by attending a
one-on-one lesson once a week for one-on-one academic hour. During this time the learner focused
solely on developing her writing skills as that is the skill that is least emphasized in our
general English class.
In the second part, all the NCATE/TESOL domains and their respective standards are
analyzed. This is accomplished through overview of different projects in the Master’s
program in which these standards were achieved. Part of this was done in our last
course, International Applied Professional Experience, while the rest was conducted by
examining all the projects in the past two years and interpreting which standard was
LITERATURE REVIEW
The first part focuses on the information behind writing acquisition and the second part
of this literature review deals with the NCATE/TESOL standards. These standards are
behind the standards based approach that was used in planning lessons for the student
in the case study. Before this project was started, a review of relevant theoretical
background was completed below.
Definition of writing
In Schmitt’s book (2002) Silva and Matsuda say that in the past writing was not
considered a proper goal of language learning. It was only used as a tool to promote the
learning of speech. Language specialist believed that people who learned to speak
would inevitably be able to write as well. That started to change in the second half of the
twentieth century.
However, according to the same authors, writing still remains one of the least
understood areas in second language acquisition. They state that one of the reasons is
the term writing itself which can refer to many different subjects, such as orthography,
literature or the actual process of writing and essay.
Above all, writing is a complex phenomenon in which writers have to consider the
following: writer, reader, text, and reality in order to construct written discourse
accordingly. Both the writer and reader are more complex than it might seem. According
to Murray (1982) they can be one person or more than one, they can be friends, critics,
teachers, etc. This role will influence the rhetorical structure of the writing piece and the
writer’s discursive identity (Ivanic, 1998).
Reality is another factor which influences the writing process. Silva and Matsuda (2002)
say that because people have a different perspective of reality, the writer has to use the
text to build their own version of reality. This ties to the last factor, text. Each text is
responds explicitly or implicitly (Bakhtin, 1986). These other texts also provide discursive
features that are often imitated in subsequent writing.
Process and product approaches
There are two main approaches in writing pedagogy nowadays according to Nunan
(1999).They are the process and product approaches. The author states that the
process approaches emphasize the steps students need to follow to write in a second
language, while the product approaches focus more closely on the final product.
Nunan describes the process approaches as ones on which the focus is on quantity
rather than quality. The final products will not be error-free as writers are encouraged to
write without worrying about correctness in the first stages. This is then followed by
different strategies, such as peer-editing and revising, to try to get the final product. The
same author talks about the product approaches as ones in which learners imitate,
copy, or transform models provided by the teacher or the textbook. The main emphasis
is on the sentence and its correctness.
Brown (2001) says that product approaches were dominant in the past when teachers
were mostly concerned with the final product. At the time, final products were expected
to meet certain standards of the rhetorical style, have accurate grammar and have
conventional organization. At the center of this approach was a model which the
students were expected to imitate.
Controlled composition and the paragraph pattern approach are representatives of the
product approaches. Controlled composition was developed within the audiolingual
approach (Silva and Matsuda, 2002) and is therefore viewed as a tool to reinforce oral
habits. In this approach, teachers focused on habit formation and error elimination to
create and reinforce desirable language behavior. Writing is seen as a service activity to
reinforce other language skills and to help language habit formation.
Similarly, in the paragraph pattern approach, emphasis is placed on the importance of
increasing awareness that writers need to produce extended texts and not just
grammatical sentences. Therefore, the focus is on the paragraph and its elements.
Basically, in this approach, students learn the different patterns and learning to write
involves developing skills in identifying, internalizing and producing these patterns.
On the other hand, Brown (2001) identifies process approaches as ones in which
students learn and focus on the process of writing, including understanding their own
composing process, building writing skills and strategies and focusing on revision and
rewriting. Students should be given enough time to go through their own processes, to
write and rewrite, and the role of the teacher is to give constructive feedback and to
encourage peer correction and editing. Silva and Matsuda (2002) say that teachers
should build an encouraging and collaborative workshop environment, provide enough
time and as little interference to allow students to work on their own strategies and
processes.
Characteristics of written language
According to Brown (2001) written language has the following characteristics that should
be taken into consideration: permanence, production time, distance, orthography,
complexity, vocabulary, and formality. Permanence is one factor which can make the
writing process scary for new learners. Once something is written down in its final
version, the writer loses power over the text and cannot make any changes to it.
Therefore, teachers should try to help students by introducing them to the process of
revising and rewriting early on.
Production time is a factor which implies that most written work has a different time
deadline. This is especially the case in classrooms where students often have limited
time to complete their writing assignments. Brown suggests that some process time
should be sacrificed to help our students achieve their goals.
The following factors are related in that it depends who the readers are. Distance,
complexity, vocabulary, and formality will be different if we are writing for a child or our
vocabulary will be used and vice-versa. In general, writing places a heavier demand on
vocabulary than speaking does.
Nunan (1999) compares written and spoken language and notes that written language is
context independent, monologic in nature, edited and redrafted, records the world as
things, and lexically dense. He says written language is context independent because
writers communicate across time and distance and the piece of writing has to recreate
the context for the readers. It is usually monologic because it is written by one person.
Finally and as previously mentioned, the lexicon is more complex and contains more
content words as nouns carry most of the meaning.
In addition to the mentioned characteristics, we also have to consider genre in writing
processes. Harmer (2007) says that writing is extremely genre-bound. Writers are bound
by certain characteristics that belong to the discourse community and which are
considered specific to the genre. For example, an advertisement will look very different
from an essay and both are easily recognizable due to their characteristics.
Contrastive rhetoric
Contrastive rhetoric is based on an article published by Robert Kaplan in 1966. He
stated that different languages have different patterns of written discourse which might
make learning writing skills more difficult for some cultures than others. For example,
while English writers tend to get straight to the point, Chinese writers will spiral around
the point, making it difficult for Chinese learners to learn the proper English discourse.
This theory has been criticized recently. Brown (2001) says that there were serious
problems in Kaplan’s study. Kaplan did not have an English control group in his study;
he based his conclusions on style manuals. Furthermore, the study was overgeneralized
as his conclusions were applied to all English writers and to all oriental languages.
Obviously, there are many differences in the Oriental languages and such
generalizations seriously undermined his conclusions. Leki (1991) continues to say that
much of the early work on contrastive rhetoric was intuitive rather than empirical.
the mistakes they make are not due to their own inadequacies, but they are due to the
contrast between the two languages.
Types of classroom writing
Brown (2001) lists five major types of classroom writing. He begins with the imitative or
writing down type. In this, learners simply copy what is on the board, e.g. English letters,
words, sentences. The goal is for the students to learn the different conventions of the
English language. A perfect example of an activity of this type is the dictation where the
teacher reads a text slowly and the students copy what they hear.
Second type of classroom writing is intensive, or controlled. In it, students are presented
a paragraph which they have to change in some way. This technique is quite useful for
reinforcing grammatical concepts (Brown, 2001). E.g. students may be given a
paragraph and instructions to change all the simple present tense verbs to simple past
verbs. As is evident from the example, this type of writing requires very little, if any,
creativity from the students. Guided writing is similar to controlled but in it, the teacher
does not have as much control. An example of this is an activity in which students watch
a video and then have to write a short summary. The teacher helps by asking guiding
questions such as who the main character is, where the story takes place, etc.
Self-writing is the next type. This is one of the most common activities in all classrooms
as it involves the essential skills of note-taking. What makes this activity different from
the others is that there is no audience, the only person who usually reads this is the
student him or herself. On the other hand we have display writing, and as the name
suggests, this involves everything that will be on display. For instance, short answers,
essays, reports, etc.
Finally, the last type of classroom writing is real writing. This type of writing has three
subcategories: academic, vocational/technical, and personal (Brown, 2001). Academic
writing involves opportunities of conveying information not just to the teacher, but to our
peers as well. This kind of writing is typical in ESP and EAP courses. In vocational
This type of writing involves real-life skills that students use in their daily routine. The
last one is personal; the main difference usually being its informality as opposed to the
more formal academic and vocational types of writing.
In addition to the previously-stated knowledge, a complete overview of the different
NCATE/TESOL standards is presented in the second part of this literature review. This
shows how the Master’s program helped us evolve into better teachers who are able to
conduct case studies and help students reach their individual goals.
NCATE/TESOL standards
TESOL is the primary source for the development of ESL standards in the United
States. Many states, such as California and New York, used the TESOL standards for
teachers of second and foreign languages.
The NCATE/TESOL standards were developed by TESOL (Teachers of English to
Speakers of Other Languages) after research showed that Interstate New Teacher
Assessment and Support Consortium (INTASC) did not have any standards that would
be applicable to teaching of second or foreign languages. These standards were first
developed in 2001. There are currently eleven different standards in five domains.
TESOL standards revision
As previously mentioned, the standards were published quite recently (2001), and
therefore the subsequent revision (2005) was more of an update than a rewrite. The
objective remains the same, and that is to prepare teachers for initial license in ESL
teaching. Likewise, they still have the five domains, which are language, culture,
instruction, assessment, and professionalism.
Each standard still has a descriptive rubric (approaches, meets, and exceeds standard)
which help institutions document candidate performance and give suggestions.
Domain 1. Language
The first domain is related to the actual language and the knowledge, understanding,
and use of major theories of language to help students develop language and literacy in
the content areas. Within this domain we have two standards; they are: language as a
system and language acquisition and development.
In the first one, teachers need to be able to show understanding of language as a
system. This includes knowledge of phonology, morphology, syntax, pragmatics and
semantics. Teachers need this knowledge to be effective teachers because EFL student
needs will differ depending on the cultural background. Furthermore, it is this knowledge
of the language that will help teachers observe similarities and differences between
languages, something that helps teachers understand native language interference and
how it affects students’ acquisition of English. This will also allow teachers anticipate
problems and difficulties students my experience. Finally, comprehensive understanding
of the language they are teaching allows teachers to serve as good models of both
spoken and written English.
The second standard in this domain is language acquisition and development. Teachers
understand the different processes that students undergo in their acquisition of
language. This understanding includes the communicative, social, and constructive
nature of language which teachers can use to build linguistic scaffolding for their
students. Likewise, teachers can show an understanding of the personal and affective
variables to create positive learning atmosphere for all their students in which students
do not fear to use English.
Teachers understand the acquisition process and the factors that influence it, such as
the learner’s age, education, L1, and experience. They are able to relate this to the
theories of language acquisition and design effective lessons which provide optimal
learning input and goals. Understanding the importance of learner’s L1 is particularly
important as this is what sets the foundation for language acquisition and provides the
Domain 2. Culture
There is only one standard in this domain and it is culture as it affects student learning.
Mastering this domain will involve understanding and using major concepts, principles,
theories and research connected to the role of culture to build positive learning
environments for everyone.
Teachers can show that they can recognize the importance of culture in language
acquisition and they address this issue in practice. Learner’s cultural background needs
to be considered to choose appropriate techniques. If this aspect is not considered, the
results will not be as favorable. Teachers can also recognize potential cross-cultural
conflicts and can act to prevent them and the negative consequences that bring to the
learning environment.
Understanding the learners’ home culture is also important in creating a sense of
community and involving the learners’ families into the process of language acquisition.
This includes knowledge of values, beliefs, roles and status, family structure, learning
styles and modalities, to name just a few. All these factors allow teachers to plan and
design culturally sensitive lessons result in a pleasant learning environment and
instruction.
Domain 3. Planning, implementing, and managing instruction
Teachers who successfully master this domain know and understand strategies related
to planning, implementing and managing ESL/EFL instruction. They are able to teach
using a variety of teaching strategies which develop and integrate language skills and
can accomplish this by using different teaching resources and technology.
The first of the three standards is planning for standards-based ESL and content
instruction. Teachers are able to apply concepts and research to plan classroom
instruction in a supporting environment for learners. This planning includes addressing
language proficiency. Planning includes specific standards-based objectives, and they
use a number of different techniques to achieve them.
The second standard is implementing and managing standards-based ESL and content
instruction. Teachers know, manage, and implement a range of different
standards-based teaching strategies to develop and integrate English listening, speaking, reading,
and writing. Not only academic objectives are considered, but also a variety of activities
that the learners find relevant and meaningful for their social environment. Teachers
base their lessons on students’ interests to help enhance comprehension and
communication and to reach students’ language development goals.
The final standard belonging to this domain is using resources effectively in ESL
instruction. Teachers show familiarity with a wide range of materials, resources, and
technology, and use them effectively in their classroom. This allows them to choose
appropriate, motivating and culturally sensitive materials to help their learners achieve
their objectives. The materials may come from one of the following sources: ESL
curricula, trade books, textbooks, online multimedia, the Internet, etc.
Domain 4. Assessment
This domain has three standards in which teachers demonstrate understanding of
issues and concepts of assessment. Furthermore, they are able to use the same in their
classrooms.
The first standard is issues of assessment for English language learners. Teachers
understand a range of different assessment issues, such as accountability, bias,
language proficiency, etc. One issue that teachers should be familiar with is the different
purposes of assessment and its basic concepts. More importantly, assessment should
be equitable, accurate, consistent and practical to administer. Furthermore, we should
have constant formative and summative testing, and the test tasks should be designed
Important part of this first standard is also the knowledge of how assessment for native
speakers and ESL/EFL students differ. Assessment may be culturally biased and
therefore invalidate our learners’ results. This can happen if we use pictures with which
our students are not familiar, e.g. a picture of a famous actor if the student does not
have a TV. Linguistic bias is another example, if we enforce only one dialect which
favors some students and does not consider other possibilities. Finally, the last example
related to actual test items, students need to be familiar with possible types of questions
if we are to avoid bias. E.g. we should not include multiple choice question, if our
learners have never seen them before.
The second standard is language proficiency assessment. Teachers can use a variety of
standards-based proficiency instruments to show growth and identify areas that need
more work. They can correctly identify, place, and reclassify language learners by
knowing how to interpret and apply the results in classroom instruction. They can also
use and design a range of different assessment instruments, both formative and
summative.
Finally, the third standard is classroom-based assessment for ESL. Teachers here can
show understanding of the relationship between teaching and assessment and are able
to assess their learners in an integrative way. One method is by creating a student
portfolio which reflects on the student’s progress over time. As this is a collection of
student’s classroom work, it allows unbiased assessment. Teachers also understand the
value of assessment using rubrics, self-assessment, and peer-assessment to promote
self-learning.
Domain 5. Professionalism
The last domain deals with professionalism and how teachers need to keep current with
the new advanced in the field. This information should then be used to improve their
The first standard is ESL research and history. We need to be able to demonstrate
knowledge of history and current educational policies to design effective instruction for
their learners.
The second standard is professional development, partnership, and advocacy. Teachers
need to be able to take advantages of professional growth opportunities and serve as
one of the pillars of their community by building partnerships with the parents,
CHAPTER I: EFL STUDENT CASE STUDY – A CASE STUDY OF AN
EFL WRITING STUDENT
Pretest
The pretest used was the standard EF placement test
(http://www.englishtown.com/partners/coef/checkout/register.asp) which tests the
following skills: grammar, reading, and listening. This was followed by a 10 minute
speaking test which is also standardized and in it the interviewer asks set questions to
determine the right level for the student. Finally, as writing section had to be added to
determine the areas where the student needs most help.
As is evident from the results of the placement test, the student is an elementary student
with above level scores in her reading comprehension and speaking abilities. The oral
interviewer determined that she was at a high elementary level of English at the time of
the test. However, it is also noticeable, from the writing pre-test, that this student has not
used English for a long time and that her grammar suffered as a result with obvious L1
interference problems.
The student was asked to write 5 sentences stating why learning English is important to
her to determine her ability to write in English. The student was given 5 minutes to
complete this task. She made several errors which are typical for Spanish speakers at
this level, e.g. omission of subject pronouns and overuse or omission of articles. The
levels of vocabulary and grammar complexity were also surprisingly low. This pretest
clearly identified areas of weakness which were focused on in the lessons with the
Name:
Date: 13/03/2012
This student took the HIMA Adaptive test.
The HIMA Adaptive Test is highly accurate, since each question is weighted according
to difficulty. Therefore, only the resulting % of each section is important. Students may
have different % for receiving the same number of correct and incorrect questions, so
those values are not shown
Correct Incorrect Blank Score
Overall score: 17 13 0 33%
Grammar: 4 6 0 21%
Reading: 7 3 0 45%
Listening: 6 4 0 32%
Writing:
Recommended level: A2 Elementary
Adaptive Test results (Overall %) New Real English CEF Level
0 - 25% A1 Beginner
26 - 39% A2 Elementary
40 - 55% B1 Intermediate
56 - 74% B2 Upper-Intermediate
75 - 99% C1 Advanced
Artifact #1
Based on the results and analysis of the pretest, I have decided to focus on correcting
grammar errors first. My assumption was that because the student studied English in the
past, she would not need extensive grammar explanations, but just simple reminders as
to certain grammar rules.
The student was reminded that sentences in the English language need a subject and
that often these are in the form of subject pronouns. In this first stage she was also
instructed to start her sentences with a subject pronoun and a simple sentence was
taught (subject+verb+complement).
Furthermore, we reviewed the two simple tenses (present and past) and their use. As
suspected, the student had no major problems with these grammar points as she has
seen them several times while she was learning the language and scored perfectly in
this artifact. However, multiple errors were seen in the use of object pronouns and
Artifact #2
In the second lesson, and as a result of the first artifact, I emphasized the different
pronouns in the English language. This is one area which causes problems quite often,
even at higher levels. This is probably due to the fact that object pronoun do not exist in
the Spanish language.
I explained the different pronouns, i.e. subject and object, and followed that by
administrating the worksheet. In it, the student had to fill in the blanks with the correct
pronoun.
At the end of the class, the student showed comprehension of the different kinds of
pronouns in the English language. The only problem student had was with pronouns
following the preposition to, she thought this preposition is followed by a subject
Artifact #3
In this lesson we covered the compound sentences. The student was introduced to the
most common conjunctions like and, but, or and their uses. She was also instructed in
the use of comma with compound sentences.
At the end of the lesson, the student was asked to fill out the below worksheet to check
her understanding of the topic. As is evident from the worksheet, the student
Artifact #4
This lesson was planned to focus on order of adjectives in the English language. Even
though this student did not show that this is problematic in her artifacts, I noticed in our
classes that she did sometimes make the mistake of using the adjective after the noun.
This, coupled with my professional experience, made me realize it is something that is
important to focus on and prevent fossilization of this error.
The student was first explained the correct order of adjectives. Subsequently, she was
given a worksheet in which she had to write simple sentences with given adjectives in
the correct order. The student had no difficulties completing this task. There were only
two errors with articles, one which is typical for Spanish speakers an small because they
Artifact #5
Another common error is the use, omission or overuse, of both definite and indefinite
articles. This artifact was designed to address this problem and explain their usage.
After a thorough explanation the student was given the below worksheet. The first part
focuses on the use of indefinite articles, while the second part focuses on the use of
definite articles. Subsequently the student had to match the rules to the example. There
were no obvious difficulties for the student in the first part, but she did struggle with
Artifact #6
In this lesson, the focus of instruction switched from grammar to the writing process. The
first part of the lesson was reviewing the previous 5 lessons, and after that, the student
was told to write a short essay to an assigned prompt.
The purpose of this assignment was to evaluate student’s strengths and weakness as
far as her writing organization goes. The student had to write at least 10 sentences. The
topic of the essay was routine and habits and as suspected, the student had problems
organizing her essay and there was no paragraph format. She simply wrote 9 sentences
Artifact #7
Based on artifact #5, the rest of the time was spent teaching the student how to improve
her writing and the process behind it. For this lesson, I decided to focus on paragraphs.
From my experience, many Ecuadorians have problems organizing their written work in
paragraphs and usually struggle with topic sentences. In this lesson and after explaining
how to successfully write paragraphs, the student had to match the topic sentences with
Artifact #8
In the last lesson we reviewed the writing process. The student was introduced with the
concepts of brainstorming, drafting, revising, proofreading and rewriting. Exercises that
deal with the concepts were designed in the worksheet below.
The student had some difficulties with the concepts of brainstorming and drafting, but
that was most likely due to not being used to these concepts. At the end of the lesson it
appeared the student managed to grasp the five concepts. The worksheet only included
Student self-evaluation
According to the self-evaluation, the student had very low self-esteem when she first
joined our school. As she did not use the language for a period of five years, she felt that
it would be extremely difficult to learn everything again. Fortunately, that was not the
case with this student, and as she realized this her self-esteem rose at the end of the
course.
The student understands that she still has a lot to learn and with her new position she
feels that time might be a problem in the future. Hopefully, it will not be a problem she
will not be able to solve as she is on the right track of achieving written fluency.
She found the steps we covered in lesson eight quite useful and plans on using them in
the future. Another point is that she plans on reading more in English which will be quite
Post-test
In the post-test, the student was presented with a similar task as the one she found in
the pretest. The task was to write a paragraph on the importance of the English
language in her life. This was a timed exercise; the student was given 20 minutes to
complete the task as I did not want to rush her and get the results which would be
affected by lack of time. She was instructed at the beginning of the class that she would
need to apply everything that was covered in the two-month period to this writing
assignment.
The post-test undoubtedly shows improvement over the pretest. Sentence structure is
used correctly, although some instances of L1 interference still exist (word order). The
paragraphs are also structured properly. Obviously, because of the low level the student
started with, some areas, like vocabulary and grammar, will still need to be improved,
but overall the student is on the right track to achieve her goal of being able to write in
English. I was surprised to see that article use remained a problem for this student, even
CHAPTER II: STANDARDS BASED POSITION PAPER
In this paper TESOL/NCATE standards have been used to analyze how the MS
program has been directly applied to my daily responsibilities as an English teacher. All
five of its domains and its corresponding standards have been examined.
Domain 1. Language
Standard 1.a. Language as a System
Candidates understand the English language as a complex system involving phonology,
morphology, syntax, pragmatics, and semantics and can use this understanding to help
their students in their language acquisition.
Artifact for Standard 1.a: Language as a System
Name of Artifact: Cambridge Advanced English Test Results
Rationale:
As part of Standard 1.a, candidates have to demonstrate proficiency in English and
serve as a good language model for their ELLs (1.a.4.). Therefore, I have decided to
improve knowledge of the English language and certify my results by taking different
EFL exams. The first one we had to take was the TOEFL exam to get accepted into the
program and since then I have also taken Cambridge ESOL CAE exam.
As the artifact clearly shows, I achieved exceptional marks in all 4 language skills and
passed with Grade A, which gives me the equivalent of a C2 level on the Common
European Framework of Reference for Languages (CEFR). Level C2 is the highest level
on the CEF and this shows that I possess the sufficient language skills which are
necessary to model the language for ELLs in both spoken and written English.
Standard 1.b. Language acquisition and development
Candidates can use different methods to aid their ELLs’ language achievement. They
can do this by using their knowledge and understanding of different theories and
research in language acquisition and development.
Artifact for Standard 1.b: Language Acquisition and Development
Name of Artifact: 4 Lesson Plans
Date: August 2011
Rationale:
Through these lesson plans I have demonstrated understanding and applying
knowledge of the role of individual learner variables in the process of learning the
English language (indicator 1.b.5.). The lesson plans use different approaches and
The lesson plans include scaffolding the language for the learners to aid their
comprehension and production while taking into account the different personal and
affective variables that affect language acquisition. Therefore, we have activities that
focus on developing linguistic, intrapersonal, interpersonal intelligences, among others.
This provides individualized language and content learning goals.
Domain 2. Culture
Standard 2. Culture as it affects student learning
Candidates know and understand the different principles, and the role of culture behind
language acquisition. They can use this knowledge to construct supportive learning
environment.
Artifact for Standard 2.: Culture as it Affects Student Learning
Name of Artifact: Professional Experience
Date: April 2010 – Present
Rationale:
Indicator 2.e. says that candidates will understand and apply concepts about the
interrelationship between language and culture. I have achieved this goal indirectly in
my current job. As the person in charge of hiring new teachers, I try to hire teachers
from different English-speaking countries so that they can transmit their knowledge and
the interdependence of language and culture.
At any given time, we have teachers from at least 4 different English-speaking countries.
Furthermore the material we use at EF is a combination of different English accents and
Domain 3. Planning, implementing, and managing instruction
Standard 3.a. Planning for standards-based ESL and content instruction
Candidates can use their knowledge to plan a standards-based class. Concepts,
research, and best practices are involved in this process.
Artifact for Standard 3.a.: Planning for Standards-Based ESL and Content Instruction
Name of Artifact: Project Plan
Date: February 2011
Rationale:
Students’ needs are assessed and a class is planned based on the results of the
In this assignment we had to design our own class for adults, in this case business
oriented class. ELLs’ needs had to be assessed first and based on that a class was
designed. Activities are student centered and the role of the teacher is that of an aid and
not an all-knowing authority.
Standard 3.b. Implementing and managing standards-based ESL and content instruction
Candidates can implement different strategies to develop ELL skills of listening, reading,
speaking, and writing. They use academic content to achieve these goals.
Artifact for Standard 3.b.: Implementing and Managing Standards-Based ESL and
Content Instruction
Name of Artifact: Goals and Outcomes
Date: September 2010
Rationale:
In this assignment we were asked to consider the goals and outcomes of a course we
designed. In my case, I designed an IELTS course which obviously had to focus on
academic development of the four language skills and the way to improve them.
Indicator 3.b.2. was accomplished in this task.
Language was view with a goal to achieve ELLs’ language and personal developmental
goals. Activities that develop authentic use (university surroundings) of the language
were developed and students were given access to content-area learning objectives
(online studies).
Standard 3.c. Using resources and technology effectively in ESL and content instruction
In addition to standard teaching materials, candidates are also able to use a variety of
new technology to achieve their goals. Technology like the DVD, Internet and computers
Artifact for Standard 3.c.: Using Resources and Technology Effectively in ESL and
Content Instruction
Name of Artifact: Technology
Date: January 2012
Rationale:
Candidates can select challenging, interesting, and motivating materials to support
student learning. They can find a wide range of nonprint resources, such as websites
In course 530 we examined different tools that are available on the Internet to meet our
learners’ language and content learning needs (indicator 3.c.4.). Websites such as
Google+, wikis, Twitter and Blogs were investigated and we were able to enhance,
create and adapt materials for our learners.
Domain 4. Assessment
Standard 4.a. Issues of assessment for English language learners
Candidates can demonstrate understanding of the different processes that affect
assessment; they can explain these to the members of their community and participate
in groups to design new tests.
Artifact for Standard 4.a.: Issues of Assessment for English Language Learners
Name of Artifact: Kinds of Tests and Testing Effects on Teaching
Date: September 2011
Course: TEFL 547 Testing and Evaluation in TEFL
Rationale:
Candidates can show an understanding of different exams and their purposes (indicator
In this artifact different Cambridge ESOL (KET, PET, FCE, CAE, and CPE) were
analyzed. Their strengths and weakness were presented and based on this a decision
can be made on the best exams to use in the classroom. Testing effects were also
examined, such concepts as backwash, reliability and validity.
Standard 4.b. Language proficiency assessment
Candidates can make informed decisions on language assessment. They can use
assessment to properly identify and place ELLs.
Artifact for Standard 4.b.: Language Proficiency Assessment
Name of Artifact: Placement testing at EF
Date: October 2010 – Present
Rationale:
Candidates need to show understanding of national requirements for ELLs (indicator
4.b.1.), identifying their entrance and exit levels from the program. Informed decisions
My professional experience has me involved in placement testing on a daily basis. Not
only is this something that is done for students at the place where I work, but it is also
done for large corporations, public schools and the Ministry of Education. Therefore, I
need to show an understanding of national requirements, procedures and instruments to
be used for the tasks of identifying ELLs’ entry and exit levels.
Standard 4.c. Classroom-based assessment for ESL
Artifact for Standard 4.c.: Classroom-Based Assessment for ESL
Name of Artifact: Assignment 3 for TEFL 547
Date: September 2011
Rationale:
Candidates show awareness in the use of language assessment to identify weaknesses
and areas where work is needed. The results of this assessment can then be analyzed
In this artifact a pretest was designed to identify areas of weakness for one ELL. The
results were examined and subsequently a lesson was designed to focus on these
areas. Finally, after this lesson, another posttest was administrated which showed
favorable results of the lesson.
Domain 5. Professionalism
Standard 5.a. ESL research and history
Candidates are able to conduct their own research and can demonstrate knowledge of
both historical and present educational policy. They can apply this knowledge to their
personal practice in their daily duties.
Artifact for Standard 5.a.: ESL Research and History
Name of Artifact: Concept Paper – Native Language Interference in Speakers of
Spanish
Date: July 2011
Rationale:
Indicator 5.a.3. is met in this artifact because it is demonstrated that classroom research
can be read and conducted. In this artifact, native language interference is analyzed with
The artifact starts with a theoretical background where it is shown that historical
research can be read. This is then followed by research work which included designing
the questionnaires, selecting the candidates and conducting the interviews. The results
were then analyzed and based on the results of this research, the teaching techniques
used up to that point were modified to address the problems of native language
interference with an aim to limit future L1 interference.
Standard 5.b. Professional development, partnership, and advocacy
Candidates have to demonstrate that they can take advantage of professional growth
opportunities and well as the ability to serve as advocates for issues affecting EFL.
Artifact for Standard 5.b.: Professional Development, Partnership and Advocacy
Name of Artifact: International Standards and How to Implement Them
Rationale:
Candidates have to show they can advocate for appropriate instruction and assessment
by sharing their knowledge with both colleagues and parents. They have to provide
support for teachers, administrators, and families as they make decisions in the school
and community (indicator 5.b.7.).
I have organized a series of conferences for EFL teachers and school administrators on
the importance of international standards in EFL assessment. This is a seminar that has
been presented to over 100 teachers and administrators, as well as 200 parents over
the course of 3 months, and which has so far yielded positive results in that more than
10 school and 5 universities, country-wide, have decided to switch to Cambridge ESOL
CONCLUSIONS AND RECOMMENDATIONS
EFL student case study
Based on the results of her progress, this student is highly motivated as she
understands that this is a skill she will need more and more in her professional career.
Her goal is to eventually get a job in another country where she will need to use English
every day. Currently she is at an A2 level and will need to go up to at least a B2 level to
achieve this goal. At the current pace, it will take her around a year to do this so the only
worry is the issue with time she mentioned in the self-evaluation.
As she has had one-on-one classes for the past two months, she must also decide if this
is something she wants to continue. As previously mentioned, she is studying in a group
class on Saturdays, but the classes do not focus on writing as much as they do on other
skills. If she is not able to continue with her private classes, she will need to talk to the
teacher and they should design supplementary activities for her specifically focusing on
development of writing skills.
Obviously, it is difficult to expect someone to learn everything in a matter of a couple of
months, but I strongly believe this student more than capable of achieving her goals with
a little guidance from her next teachers. She has all the skills necessary for success and
as her new position will involve her in the language more, her progress will be faster as
well.
I expect her to continue developing her writing skills by practicing at home. She also
mentioned that she will start reading newspapers as well. These are great ways to
improve her skills and the only thing I would recommend is to pay special attention to
TEFL program portfolio
As witnessed in the second part of the thesis, this program provides invaluable insight
into our own development as teachers. Without realizing, we have started addressing all
the different domains and standards that belong to NCATE/TESOL. This is something
that improves us personally, and also prepares for future teaching jobs, whether they
are here in Ecuador or elsewhere. It is on us now to continue this practice, and if
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