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Assignment #1 by Paul Chow:
How would it feel to drink Goji juice and be on top of the world each and every day as you roll out of bed in the morning? No headaches, no pain, and boundless energy to take you through the day? You will feel energized, refreshed, and incredibly motivated to confront life on your own terms and conditions. This is no idle pipe dream or fantasy. Imagine drinking Goji juice and acquiring almost superhuman vitality that will
empower you to take on any challenges that come your way, and shrug them off like they were nothing more than inconsequential flies?? Picture yourself being in the pink of health, and possessing the feeling that you can go out and conquer the world? If you were to drink Goji juice, you will feel exactly this way! Studies have proven that this juice is a virtual fountain of youth in a bottle that will turn back the hands of time and make you look and feel younger than ever before. As you drink the Goji juice, you will begin to notice a remarkable change in yourself. Painstaking research has shown Goji is capable of astounding feats that no other vitamin, supplement or liquid known to man can do! Besides the well-known benefits which include strengthening your immune system and prolonging your life span, it will also help you to maintain a healthy weight, promote normal blood sugar levels, enhance sexual function, restore and repair DNA, improve fertility….the list goes on and on!! I have saved the most important point for last. Did you know that Goji is the most powerful anti-aging food and supplement on earth? Its powerful blend of unique master molecule
polysaccharides and potent antioxidants help prevent premature aging as they help your body fight the free radicals that bombard it constantly. In addition to that, you will look and feel younger due to Goji’s ability to stimulate your pituitary gland to produce hGH (Human Growth Hormone), also known as the ‘youth hormone’ since it
rejuvenates your body and turns back your biological clock! As you review the jaw- dropping, awe-inspiring benefits of drinking Goji juice, would it make any sense at all not to??
Jo Han’s Comments: This is great. The embedded commands have been used
appropriately alongside with the ‘weasels’ and trance words. However, if you want to use these hypnotic devices in print, it’ll be more appropriate to add italics, to the weasels and trance words.
Underlining is also a great way to deliver added emphasis.
Notice how I’ve also included a line break right after the trance word ‘imagine’. It’s always a good idea to keep your sentences and pargaphs short.
Short, is hypnotic. For example…
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“Imagine…
Drinking Goji juice and acquiring almost superhuman vitality that will empower you to take on any challenges that come your way, and shrug them off like they were nothing more than inconsequential flies”
Paul can certainly do with a lot more ‘word pictures’.
Stuff on health tends to include boring jargon, and the word pictures he used like
‘fountain of youth in a bottle’ that will ‘turn back the hands of time’ make it easier for the prospect to imagine the benefits even better, and should be sprinkled liberally into the copy.
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Assignment #1: by Tim Johnson
D
ear Friend,I
mage if you will,• Waking up every morning feeling great…with that oh so rested feeling only experienced from having a wonderful peace-full sleep
• You spring out of bed with a surge of energy
• You will feel great, ready to start another wonderful day • Feeling cool, calm and collected
• Feeling radiant and excited, you give yourself a thumbs up after you glance at yourself in the mirror
• You have a warm glow and radiant color in your cheeks • Your step is light and your movement swift
• You are confident and sure of your self
• Excited and pumped up knowing it’s going to be a super day and everything is going to go your way
• You have been feeling like this since you started taking that new antioxidant drink a week ago
OK...back to the present for a minute…
It’s true and I am here right now to let you in on one of the world’s biggest secrets about antioxidants. Picture this…
The facts are overwhelming…hundreds of university studies have proved that regular use of antioxidants dramatically increases total circulation in the human body. When this happens all parts of your body respond.
The physician’s desk reference cites over a hundred effects brought about by improved circulation, here’s a few:
• Improves heart and lung function
• Increase blood flow in veins, arteries, capillaries and capillary beds • Increased memory as higher levels of oxygen feed the brain
• Increased muscle tone as blood and oxygen is instantly available to repair muscle fibers
• Increase blood flow to arms, legs and genitals, and;
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• Increased sexual performance with greater pleasure
You don’t need a PhD. to figure out that means, thousands of people that have increased their circulation and raved about their increased sex drive and explosive orgasms. Just wait it gets better… It’s not only for men, women find that there desire for love making increases 10 fold.
Just what was in that drink?
For hundreds of years Eastern cultures have known the secrets of achieving all the benefits listed above. Hidden manuscripts have revealed that Goji has been a secret that has been passed on from Emperor to Emperor as far back as the Ming Dynasty.
The secret is found in the bright red berry call Goji berry. The scientific name is Lycium barbarum. It turns out that Goji is classed super oxidant, having the highest antioxidant values of any substance. When crushed and dried the cherry red powder can be mixed with water or juice making a flavorful pleasant drink. The powder can also be lightly rubbed onto the skin where it is absorbed quickly resulting in a warm tingling sensation. Let me show you hundreds of testimonials from totally satisfied customers, I am sure you we see that what they had to say was pure happiness…their message is loud and clear. You too will know the feeling as soon as you experience the magic of Gogi. Order today!
Warmly, Tim Johnson
PS. While you wait for your Gogi to arrive by express mail, I would suggest you get some sleep, because you are going need your rest after your woman tries Gogi. You are going to be busy lad! Get ready because it’s going to be on hell of a wild ride!
Jo Han’s Comments: First of all Tim, you gotta check on the grammar. The first word should be ‘Imagine’ and not ‘Image’. Oh well, it was probably a typo cos I know how excited you are about this course.
Secondly, I am very impressed in how comprehensive the ‘benefits’ of Goji are and how you’ve enunciated so many of them in the copy.
One big mistake though, early in the copy, is that you don’t want to do things like “OK...back to the present for a minute…”
Big BIG mistake. You’ve worked hard in the opener to create a trance state, and with that statement you’ve erased everything you’ve done earlier because you’re implying “Hey, that stuff you were thinking about ain’t real!”
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When you evoke a trance state, you wanna KEEP them there!
Also, I don’t see many ‘weasel phrases’ and embedded commands. You want to highlight these by italicizing the weasel phrases and bolding the embedded commands. Also, there are hardly any word pictures. So make sure you try to use more of these devices.
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Assignment #1 by Andy Graham
See yourself at your check up with your doctor. What would it be like to hear that your blood pressure is now down to normal levels? You can now count yourself outside the one in four U.S. adults with hypertension, so you are now less at risk from heart attack, stroke and kidney failure. (Researchers from Beijing Medical University reported in a June 1998 issue of the journal Acta Physiologica Sinica that increased blood pressure could be prevented significantly by Goji's unique polysaccharide.) And what if you were to be told that your cholesterol had reduced to an acceptable level.? (A 2004 study reported in Life Sciences demonstrated that Lycium barbarum fruit extract significantly reduced total serum cholesterol, triglyceride concentration and blood glucose, while markedly increasing HLD cholesterol (the "good" cholesterol).) How does it feel to learn that your blood sugar is now under control? (From the Journal of the Pharmaceutical Society of Japan, 2006: Clinical findings suggest that Lycium barbarum polysaccharide can control blood glucose and modulate the metabolism of glucose, leading to significant improvement of oxidative stress markers in rats with NIDDM (non-insulin dependent diabetes mellitus). They also found that LBP decreases damage to DNA, possibly via a decrease in oxidative stress levels.) As you realise that this is all down to your drinking Goji juice, you appreciate that this is the most important thing you have ever done for you and your family's health and well being. It's not necessary to understand how Goji juice works at a cellular level, just allow this super food to work like magic to turn you into the epitome of glowing health! And you don't have to be a highly qualified medical practitioner to notice the major health shifts that occur when you drink the Goji juice. Quit being sick and tired of being sick and tired. Do the right thing - grab your bottle of Goji juice NOW!
Jo Han’s Comments: Andy, this is a great angle to use. The ‘set up’ was pretty poor though.
It take s a lot more details to get people to ‘see themselves’ at their checkup with their doctor.
You need to dramatize it more. An example would be…
“You hand your appointment card over to the nurse and you’re ushered to the waiting room. Beads of sweat gather around your forehead, and you feel your heartbeat racing at a 100 miles per hour. What would the results of this health check be like?”
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Make it seem like it’s gonna be a ‘bad’ scenario and then turn it ‘around’ with amazing great results cos the guy drank a lot of Goji.
Other than that, the usual applies. The word pictures, italicization of the weasel phrases and trance words and bolding embedded commands.
Assignment 1
Due 4/29/07 11:00 EST Submitted by Eric Grigsby
If you were to look at your body under a high powered microscope you could see the battle that is raging every minute of every day as your bodies cells fight for their very survival. This fight rages against disease, and foreign chemicals that are harmful, and are literaly sucking the energy and youth right out of you. Once every 40 to 50 there is a major breakthrough of discovery and in field of medicine. In the last 50 years no medical discovery will have more profound affect on your life. Hidden high in the remote
mountain regions of Asia, this tiny fruit has more disease fighting life-force per ounce then any other natural substance known to man.
You don’t have to be a health expert to take charge of tapping into the best kept secret to doubling your energy, clearing your mind, improving your mood, and sustaining your life. Three days after taking this new superfood I invite you to notice how you
consistently feel great, are full of youthful energy.
What would it be like to have total confidence and peace about your health while others around you are attacked by cold and flu symptoms. These bugs have no chance of making you sick because of your daily intake of Goji, your bodies 10 trillion cells, have an unfair advantage to protect and defend your body against sickness, disease.
Jo Han’s Comments: This is perfect! This is THE model assignment.
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Assignment #1 by Steve McCann
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